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Kelly E. Keough's avatar

Ami, thank you for the positive feedback. It’s very supportive. I love the word study.

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Kelly E. Keough's avatar

Hi Jeanne, I think that is the best thing I've heard all day. I am excited that you embraced that storytelling technique. Feel free to send me the scene to read. I would love to see the before and after. Either way, no pressure at all, I appreciate your critical thinking!

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Kelly E. Keough's avatar

Thanks Jacquelin, I look forward to reading more of your expert posts on writing and editing!

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Amy Makechnie's avatar

This is so good (and THANK YOU for the shout out). I'm going to study this again and again...

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Jeanne's avatar

I’m motivated to revise the opening scene of my memoir with your points in mind.

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Jacquelin Cangro's avatar

What a great comprehensive post!

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